Hey Guys,
you want to Join Excellent and dont know what to write ?
Here is a example for you how to write a nice Apply.
Of course it would be better if all of you has his own reasons to Join us.
All Applys please in a several Topic - all of you deserve it to get a own one !
We are a international Club, so please use the most public language : ENGLISH !
When you make a Apply we talk intern about it, so think twice, how you handle with Members and the Fantasy Society.
Here is now the Example Appilication :
Personal Stuff :
My name is Mary and im 18 Years old and live in Cologne City.
Since some Month i live alone Because Problems with my Parents.
I go to the 11 Grade on a Gymnasium, so its really hard for me to stand on my own legs.
I work in a Shop after School to get a little bit money to be more indipendit.
I speak Turkish - English - German - Spanish ( since 1 Year ) - Latin ( i can translate it to the German).
Im half Turkish and half English.
In my free Time i go shopping , dancing , singing , chill out with my friends or make my Homework.
I love listen RnB & HipHop. Its a kind of StressLesser if im pissed the music gets me down.
Ingame Chars :
Ingame Name : Senszatiion
Character : Lucy
Level : 53
Couple : xXLuLoXx
Stats Battle : ( 3744 / 2076 ) 64 % -> Rank 89
Stats Basic : ( 355 / 294 ) 54 % -> Rank 6799
Perfects : 273
Guard Breaks : 2453
I Love Playing Battle, but since some Month i start Playing Basic to improve my Skill -
so i think i can be a better willer in Battle.
My Stats Battle : ( 48 Str / 33 Sta / 14 Dex / 100 Wil )+8 Charge +1 Smash +1 Serve +2 Lob Racket (+6 Fire) Shoes (+7 Fire)
My Basic Stats : ( 65 Str / 20 Sta / 30 Dex / 79 Wil ) +1 Charge +8 Smash +2 Serve +1 Lob
Ingame Name : Extravaqant
Character : Shua
Level : 10
Couple : None
Basic Record : ( 28 W / 1 L )
Battle Record : ( 46 W / 8 L )
Perfects : 38
GuardBreaks : 2
Stats : 65 Str / 12 Sta / 47 Dex / 16 Wil
HP : 310
When im Lvl 60 i have 116 Str 60 Dex + 8 Wind
Why i want to Join YOU ! :
In this Club are a lot of good Members & a nice Forum.
Also i want to improve my Battle / Basic Skill
Why you should take me :
I think you should take me, because i play now with my Shua Guard, so i can help you lvling the Club.Furthermore im a Person who is really Active in Forums & im a loyal Club Member, who dont leave after 1 week when the Club is a little bit unactive.
I hope you give me the oppertunity to show you from my best side .
Kiss Mary
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This Apply is really detaily, but with such an Apply you have really good Chances to Join.
Have Fun
Subject: Example for a Appilication ! 
Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:00 am
